by MaryAnn678
Love how the fantasy became reality only to be a fantasy come true! :) Keep writing!
Its hard to believe you're female; writing crude shit like this. You go up for a camping trip with the old man and take porno films with you? Who were they supposed to turn on?
What a let down.
Of course it's good that she enjoyed it but what a rubbish ending.
They were pussies for finishing so fast anyway.
What a marvelous twist at the end!!!
It was a far better than average "rape victim has multiple orgasms" story - the dialog was a lot better for one thing - but the twist made it a 5