All Comments on 'Wild Time in the Wilderness'

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LeapordaQwenLeapordaQwenalmost 16 years ago
NICE!

Love how the fantasy became reality only to be a fantasy come true! :) Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
best story

good story with good twist. best one ive ever read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
trash

Its hard to believe you're female; writing crude shit like this. You go up for a camping trip with the old man and take porno films with you? Who were they supposed to turn on?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Dissapointing.

What a let down.

Of course it's good that she enjoyed it but what a rubbish ending.

They were pussies for finishing so fast anyway.

WittonWittonover 1 year ago

What a marvelous twist at the end!!!

It was a far better than average "rape victim has multiple orgasms" story - the dialog was a lot better for one thing - but the twist made it a 5

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