All Comments on 'Wild Time in the Wilderness'

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WittonWittonover 1 year ago

What a marvelous twist at the end!!!

It was a far better than average "rape victim has multiple orgasms" story - the dialog was a lot better for one thing - but the twist made it a 5

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Dissapointing.

What a let down.

Of course it's good that she enjoyed it but what a rubbish ending.

They were pussies for finishing so fast anyway.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
trash

Its hard to believe you're female; writing crude shit like this. You go up for a camping trip with the old man and take porno films with you? Who were they supposed to turn on?

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
best story

good story with good twist. best one ive ever read.

LeapordaQwenLeapordaQwenabout 16 years ago
NICE!

Love how the fantasy became reality only to be a fantasy come true! :) Keep writing!

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