All Comments on 'Will He Size Up? Ch. 06'

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PaintbrushdantePaintbrushdantealmost 4 years ago
Dat ass.

I love this romance, so much, my friend. Every part of it has been made so carefully, and it emphasizes every part of the story, showing that not all erotic stories consist of such, but actual storytelling, too.

I hope you're keeping safe during this Pandemic, atleast, Abruzz. I'm sure everyone else, feel the same.

I will say this, though: I'm betting quite a few of us here, including me, are waiting for you to post a Chapter where the back door between Holly''s 56 inch asscheeks is finally explored with Mat's member.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
incomplete

Will He Size Up is a marvelous romance story, but it needs one more chapter at least to "tie things up." An excellent introduction, a carefully paced plot, and good character development, all contribute to this excellent love story. The love scenes, although rather too brief, are beautifully written, and have exactly the right tenderness which is crucial for good romance story writing. Five stars for an excellent story.

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Hi Followers and other interested people! Firstly, I'd like to thank you all for supporting my stories "Will He Size Up?" and "Small Dick Virgin." Secondly, I'd like to thank you for all the feedback I have received regarding these two stories. This is just an update about oth...

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