by silkstockingslover
The idea of this happening between Faith and Willow is delicious. I would absolutely love to read a sequel!
Totally loved it...I like tales where people who kind of need taken down a notch get the tables turned on them. If you revisit this fandom, maybe our newly confident Willow can see about setting Cordelia back from her self-erected pedestal (either with or without Faith's help)?
Not to be petty but it is Xander. Other than that i loved the story and i never read or particulary like fanfic.
I only read thjnbone because it was you writing it. Great job from a buffy fan.
Something different from you - the use of characters not of your own creation. Nice work. LOVED having Willow take Faith like that - definitely put her in her place. Might make a good series if you have plans for any more.
Very nice. How about a sequel where Willow uses her magic to give herself a dick, and uses it on Faith and Cordie?
Seriously, the first time or two was cute. Even a few of the stories where you place yourself as the protagonist were interesting. Now it seems half your characters read your work.
That is lazy. It also breaks the fourth wall of your atort and takes us out of the world you are creating so convincingly just so you can wink at us. Far too amateurish for a writer of your quality.
Stop it please. If we are reading your work and like it, we know where to find more. If you want to advertise, do it somewhere else.
630. I had a hard time getting into this one-too much detail in the beginning. But the end was interesting and seems to portend a hot continuation. Not too interested in witches and the supernatural, however.