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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I'm liking the direction of this story. It still feels weird and kinda unnatural that people are so willing to side with Collin, but it makes sense from a structure sense, in that they don't realize how much of a schmuck he is until he fucks them (literally).

I can't help but sense a bit of anticipation that Collin will sodomize Jack's mom in chapter 4 (when attention is paid several times to her "shapely thick ass" or "big bubble butt", it implies she's gonna get ass-fucked). after all, what bigger betrayal is there left for Jack than of his own mother to be taken in a (relatively) taboo/unnatural erotic manner by his tormentor... creampie/pregnancy seems like more of a betrayal as it shows a willingness to bear his consequence, but it's still a natural process... for Jack's mom to take it in the ass from Collin means that she's attracted to him, that she's willing to betray her own son's feelings by having sex with his tormentor (it's implied in chapter 1 that she quietly suspected Collin was beating him up), but also that she's willing to surrender herself to him completely and submit to a humiliating and painful coupling with him purely to satisfy him as a lover

who knows, maybe Jack will get the video just as mom sends him to get a drink from the other room... Jack will fall, break his crown, and Jill will cum again after (...I just had to)

Al_AnonAl_Anonover 1 year ago

Well, we all know that his mother will always love him & would never betray him like that. I mean, just imagine how devastating that would be to poor Jack.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

maybe colin will seduce jack's mom by riling up jack, letting him land a couple hits (let jack think that he's won), then take a trip to see the school nurse, jack's mom. he'll win her over playing wounded, so she'll sympathize as she tries to make him feel better, and she'll be turned against her own son when she hears that jack did it.

being a nurse, she'll have to examine him physically to make sure he's totally fine. she'll get turned on by his hot muscular body and the flattery he'll undoubtedly give her... one thing will lead to another and next thing Jack knows, Collin is balls-deep up the mom's ass

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

May as well add plot twist where Collin has crush on Jack and do all of this to get rid all women around jack in order to claim him for himself, that would be more interesting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Need that part 4 king, not to pressure you but please do give us an update 😋

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I wonder if Jack will catch Collin in the act next chapter...

since there's quite a bit of buildup for the prom and Jack's mom is a school nurse, maybe she'll be a prom chaperone... and just as Jack and Jill are enjoying their magic moment at prom, Jack gets a media-message from Collin... and realizes he doesn't see his mom where she was earlier, and as he looks for a private spot to look at the video, he stumbles upon Collin actually fucking her

Asperger27Asperger27over 1 year agoAuthor

Part 4 is almost done. Just proofreading it now

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

plot is too predictable.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Well …looking at ur mugshot…all I can say is taht u r one dickface looking creepy person! No doubt u ahve to have incest and shit as ur only fantasies as no girl would wanna touch u with a barge pole!!

AnonymousAnonymous24 days ago

@Anonymous what mugshot are you talking about?

AnonymousAnonymous20 days ago

Wait a minute, Jack's Mom's name is Penelope in this chapter but in the very next chapter her name is Judy. Why the sudden change?

AnonymousAnonymous1 day ago

@Aspeegee27

Quick question, just how long can Collin keep having sex with Jill, Judy, and Janet until he's done?

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