All Comments on 'Winter Romance'

This was cute and sweet, just what I needed. I hope you write more like this. :) --wlt

but too rushed, would have been better if it were a bit more drawn out

<B>Nice-Sweet-Happy-Fast</B>

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This is all good, but too fast for believability. They should have more conversation at the party and more dates, some dressy, some not, all should be fun. You made a really good point when she hoped he wasn't toying with her. Given her height, weight and <I>uncertainty about her appearance</I>, she would wonder why a very attractive and very wealthy man was pursuing her. He needs time to woo her and overcome her insecurities.

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Write more, I look forward to your next posting.

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<I>srgeek</I>

Both plot and characters. Sleeping together on a first date is one thing, but proposal?