by roblondon2
I missed you. Your story is hot and very original. He gets his wishes but the way they are fulfilled is always unpredectible. I hope you'll continue writing this story faster than a chapter/year.
Really love the note in box concept. Keep it up. Don’t make us wait to long
Yes, that story was cookin'!! Keep it up, & you'll continue with **5**Star ratings from me! (Still need an editor, tho'!...😒)
For someone that was apparently a real bitch and queen of the high school, Ashley (or is it Ashely? It changed often) was very meek and submissive here. Sure she needed Lucy or her future was in serious danger, but you'd think she'd at least make the occasional complaint. Just felt a bit off that's all. I still think Lucy is a bit of a psycho and the MC is still a bit of a beta. It's a fun ride though.