All Comments on 'Wish Box Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
welcome back!

Glad to see you writing again! And a hot continuation!!

MiniwandMiniwandabout 6 years ago
Finally

I missed you. Your story is hot and very original. He gets his wishes but the way they are fulfilled is always unpredectible. I hope you'll continue writing this story faster than a chapter/year.

anonintexas1999anonintexas1999about 6 years ago
very nice

please don't make us wait so long for more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Really love the note in box concept. Keep it up. Don’t make us wait to long

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Next

Don't stop! Waiting on Teacher!

MarkT63MarkT63over 2 years ago

Great Salt and Pepper fantasy!!!

MADDOGINTEXASMADDOGINTEXASalmost 2 years ago

Yes, that story was cookin'!! Keep it up, & you'll continue with **5**Star ratings from me! (Still need an editor, tho'!...😒)

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

For someone that was apparently a real bitch and queen of the high school, Ashley (or is it Ashely? It changed often) was very meek and submissive here. Sure she needed Lucy or her future was in serious danger, but you'd think she'd at least make the occasional complaint. Just felt a bit off that's all. I still think Lucy is a bit of a psycho and the MC is still a bit of a beta. It's a fun ride though.

ClearmuseClearmuse15 days ago

Imaginative, good stuff.

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