All Comments on 'Wishing for a Domme Ch. 02'

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lazy_readerlazy_readerover 3 years ago

Interesting, although the domme needs more education. Without it, I'd be worried about the sub.

Also, I was rather confused, because you seem to have switched the names. In the first chapter, Nevra was the would-be domme and Milana was the sub. The opposite is true in this chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Switch the names

It seems that you have switched the names, still enjoyed the story. Thanks

duncmiesterduncmiesteralmost 3 years ago

You need to go back and get the characters names right.nothing ruins a story more than switching. A characters name

LBCNLLBCNLover 2 years ago

Shame to ruin a story like this...switching the names and rushing to finish it is just lazy and inconsiserate to the reader.

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