by Templar_Writer
Interesting, although the domme needs more education. Without it, I'd be worried about the sub.
Also, I was rather confused, because you seem to have switched the names. In the first chapter, Nevra was the would-be domme and Milana was the sub. The opposite is true in this chapter.
It seems that you have switched the names, still enjoyed the story. Thanks
You need to go back and get the characters names right.nothing ruins a story more than switching. A characters name
Shame to ruin a story like this...switching the names and rushing to finish it is just lazy and inconsiserate to the reader.