by mypenname3000
Something went astray between page 2 and page 3? I have enjoyed the first 2 chapters
Scratch that previous comment. The pages didn't load properly on my laptop. My mess up. I do like the story though.
This is your best series yet. Can't wait to see where the story goes. I hope there is a lot of cuckolding in the following chapters.
I'm not sure what the point of this is and why there are so many chapters when it's all just essentially the same thing. I mean none of the women he's fucking has any real awareness of what's happening or can seem to grasp the reality of the situation, and the men also seem to automatically be OK with everything. It just feels like he's screwing mindless puppets that go along with everything. Where's the story, the drama? It feels so empty. Just my take on it. They should have some kind of awareness of it or maybe a little resistance. It's no fun and not really entertaining if they're all just so completely submissive to his will.
What's the point if everyone's just a sex puppet. Even the mother and sister are barely more than random bodies if his mind control is this total and nobody minds what happens.