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analustanalust9 months ago

Liked it but, could use editing.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Good first story, good flow, but the HORRIBLE Grammar fails made it very hard to follow and understand. You VERY BADLY need an editor

oldjarhead1981oldjarhead19819 months ago

Ditto what Anonymous and analyst said.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Good start, now finish it. Please edit and check the flow of the story and your grammar.

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