All Comments on 'Wolf's Den Ch. 03'

You have, what's shaping up to be a good story, but I really wish the chapters were longer. By the time I was really into chapter 3 it was over. That's very frustrating. I know writers like to end their chapters at specific places for specific reasons, but a girl can dream can't she.

just as it was gettin to be fun the chapter ended!!however update real soon!

too short. please make the chapters longer.

i agree the chapters are to short.. try and make them longer even if it delays posting by a little .. it would be great to read more in a single chapter.. its almost like reading one page in a book at a time when we would rather see more.. but besides that.. your story is wonderful .. i am really looking forward to more..

painfully short. If the quality of writing wasn't so good, I wouldn't bother reading it. Please, please make the chapters longer. I'm really enjoying your story so far but the chapters always come to an abrupt halt way too soon. I think I said this before, but I'll say it again. Aim for two literotica pages. Even if it's not two full lit pages, people will be satisfied with that. 1 page is terrible, even when the writing is so good.

Make your chapters longer, sweetie, it captures the attention of the reader for more than three minutes. The writing is splendid, by the way, so it's only the length you have to work on. If you're using Microsoft Word, fill out at least fifteen pages. It helps with the 'flow' of the story. Good luck with the next chapter! <3 Lillian.

Ok it's official you have just become one of my favorites. You chapters are way too short for my liking but they are packed with a wonderful plot and the promise of awesome twists. Bravo!

Great story so far -- I think you have a winner on your hands! But I agree with everyone else - make the chapters longer! (And that's not a criticism, by the way. It's more of a compliment. We wouldn't want longer chapters if we didn't like it). :) Waiting anxiously for the next installment.

and yes, I agree that I would like longer chapters, but I'm not going to stop reading just because of short chapters.

Your story is great and the chapters are just fine as they are. You write them as long or as short as you need to, to finish your story. Don't let their words batter you into writer's block.

I loved your story so far. Don't worry about the chapters quality is more important than quantity. However,please update soon.

Enjoyed your story I have been checking dailly to read the next chapter.. Are you going to continue

Continue plz?.

Crazy mad hot piece of male lusciousness.... thank you. I can see him so very clearly and the image is so flavorful. Can't wait for the next installment. Let's see how clever this Alpha is at getting answers to questions.

not long enough for my liking, but good dtory line so far.

i'd like more, but do keep posting.

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