by lilgirlsix
i'm just windering how old she is because she keeps in saying she so much older than him. it's a lovely story keep writing
With every chapter I get more pulled into this story. I like the fact that Karen is dreaming of Cole's wolf. Her subconscious is accepting the whole idea of weres. Or is there really something about her that no one knows about? All her friends are weres. I just saying it's a possibility. And now that she has mated w/Cole in her dreams he is dreaming of being w/Karen. And I haven't even mentioned everything going on w/the rouges.
You have pulled me into this story and I look forward to the next chapter.
I'm so glad I came across your story. It is quite enjoyable and thanks for the quick posts.
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He was wondering the same thing in the last chapter!!!!
It is a bit late at this point but I sort of wish the posts were longer than a single page or a page and barely a second. The other thing is you have done some time skips that sort of had me blinking. What I mean by that is the male is in one spot one moment and then walking into her room the next. I would have to suggest either putting in something that indicates a time skip sort of like you have been doing when you separate what is happening to her and him.
I am enjoying this though a great deal.
I really like the plot of this story and the idea of it, but I am having a really really hard time telling what is a dream and what is reality. If you do dream sequences in the future, maybe the dreams could be in italics?