by lilgirlsix
Wow. Developing a character is hard enough but here you have LOTS! Just a comment though, not only do I forget some of the names but I also couldn't match some names with a face ^^ While it is important to have these additional minor characters, I hope you would, like, focus on the main characters ^^ I'm glad to see Carr and Cole here. And that they found an ally from the oldest Were in North America.
Thanks for the update. I like it that you do it on a timely basis.
Great story. I hope that the Council doesn't take forever to reveal all background info about these "special" females and the Wolf Moon.
I can not wait to see if the other Alphas', near the Baxter pack, reactions to the Council's prior silence.
Thanks for your regular updates to this exciting story.
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and Better. As this story evolves so does your ability to tell it. With every chapter you bring another character into the picture, so that the story continues to build. It really is getting exciting as we get closer to discovering the secret of the human women.
More, I just want more!
Love love love love your story.
I check your page every other hour to see if you posted.
It keeps getting bettet & better.
Hope it won't end soon, but wishing for the end. If you get my meaning.
Keep up the great work.
now that was a short tease i like Rhys good for him found love again keep up the good work hun can't wait for the next one. Gary's going down
Your stories are getting better. You have a great talent for connecting all the characters...please keep it up.... I am glad in the direction that you are going and since you mentioned another woman by name, Jenna this means that maybe she is a true mate of one of the other Baxter pack members....I do hope you get into why these older woman seem to be mating to the baxter pack i know Karen has questioned the age difference between her and Cole's age...and her having were ancestors does explain why she heals the way she does.....And I know that you will rock the rest of the story....AWESOME is all I can say....YOU GO GIRL!!!!!!
Why are the women descended from the Vlkolk pack the only ones to have had dreams of wolves and mating?
I love Rhys!! He is such a sweetheart! I hope they kill Gary's psycho ass real soon as well as that council asshole!! Hurry up Wolf Moon, I sooo wanna see what happens!!!! Please update real soon xoxo
I really like this story, but the chapter didn't really uncover anything. That is except rhys finding his mate. I think at least we could of found what's all the hub bub with the woman since the council is there. Your on chapter 15 and hardly any action except a bunch of wolf sex n what not. I love the story, the plot n everthing I just wish something unfold soon. A
Why does Niklas want to kill all the women? and WTG Rhys for putting Niklas in his place!
Not every chapter can solve your curiosity. You write your way - let the lady write her way. I am loving the story just the way you are writing it. And my daughter was right - WTG Rhys! I am quite sure he and Cole are going to turn out to be friends in the long run.
God this story should be published. And put in the adult book section
Does Rhys remind anyone else a bit of Major Armstrong from "Fullmetal Alchemist," or is it just me? ^^
Rhys definitely is reminiscent of Armstrong. I am surprised at how many people commented on Full Metal though... I
why would katy be on a dating website if she was saving her self? didnt they track down these women because they were all searched and interviewed by Gary.
Yes PLEASE do away with Both those idiots!!! I mean to say so nonchalantly to kill all of them and be done with it!!! I wanted to reach in and Rip his throat out!!! I'm HOPING for Extremely Excruciating Deaths for not just Metzger and Gary but if the rest of the "pack" is ANYTHING like either Gary or Paul they need to be put down as well! THEY'RE the TRUE DANGER!!! NOT a group of women who just so Happens to be decedents of some ancient pack this European Council Obviously felt threatened by so much so they thought they wiped them out! I'm Glad they didn't then these Wonderfully Beautiful women would not have been born and be mated!!!