All Comments on 'Women of Nithia'

It is a good story but you didn't finish it, that's the problem. One thing is to leave the reader wanting more and another not finish the story. It has good posibilities if you revised and expand this story.

Hey, screw everyone else. I liked it, keep writing. And do a chapter 2.

Made me want to be her!! I loved it. Screw everyone else!! Amazing.

I loved it, and was disappointed there wasn't a Ch.2. Like the previous commentator, I wanted to be her... A suggestion: have him take part in an orgy. That would totally turn me on.