All Comments on 'Womens' Compliance Center'

Seems like an edit, copy & paste hiccup; a few minor glitches. But overall, great buildup. Not sure if the universe established is credible enough to allow for many future chapters. Anyway, the payback twist was fun to read.

A very poor attempt at a story. The concept is fine and feasible, the characterisation could be better, currently it is confusing, the use of the English language is borderline pathetic, first year secondary school pupils would find fault with both the spelling and grammar, if they were to turn in a work piece with this number of errors it would be returned with a red line across the pages.

Make use of not only a spellchecker and a grammar programme on your computer but also a dictionary and thesaurus.

Hoping for more chapters

The story is very poorly written. It needs to be thoroughly proof-read. The story is very disjointed.