All Comments on 'Women's Tongue & Toilet Slave at Club'

A different story line for sure. I love the female dominance, and of course, the piss play. I was sad with the way it ended, but now am filled with imagination on what happens next. I can’t help wonder if Hannah is a tranny??!! Wouldn’t that be a surprise! 5*s

I gave this five stars, because it's extremely well written with a thrilling premise that also makes some sense with a stretch of the imagination that good erotica requires. I like how the dude is being punished for finding his way into a club above his social status in a way that hurts, kinda grosses out and thrills him. By placing the story in one of "those" clubs I imagine in a place like LA, the author didn't even have to describe the girls cause you know the piss is coming out of the smoking hot best. The descriptions of everything are very good, though.

If I had to suggest improvements (mainly just cause it can be fun for the author to hear, not cause I think this story needs them), I'd say:

- Rather than threaten him w snipping off his dick, which isn't plausible, she should've kicked him right in the nuts. Or better yet, his balls shouldve been hanging out of his fly for girls to beat on just in case he didn't obey. He would've cranked his jaws wide open ASAP.

- I wish the story had ended after the next girl had rubbed herself off to spraying all her cunt juice into his mouth, maybe chasing it w piss, cause that's hot AF.

Well done!

This story is very good can't wait for more also at some point you should have a girl just piss all over him rather than making him drink it

Oh my :) I love this story pls more :D

SO GOOOOOOOOOOOD PLS MOREEEEEEEEE

Hopefully you carry on with this concept.

Adding more chapters etc. Lots of fun potential.

Well Done,,, Yes!

Hallo Disgustling!

Your story "Women's Tongue & Toilet Slave at Club" was a lot hotter and sexier than I had expected..

So I'm giving it 5-Stars, thank-you!

Kat..

IT'S HOT,,, YES!

Hallo Again Disgustling!

So what is his fucking problem?!... He's at a hot nightclub, there's music and Hot Friendly Women, with all he can drink and lot's of pussies to lick and it's just for him all free of charge!... I just can't see what's not to like, :) !

I'd love to read chapter-2 of "Women's Tongue & Toilet Slave at Club", maybe this time the ladies will demand full service, wouldn't that be yummy!!

So thank-you and this time I'm giving it 10-Stars, I don't want to get in a rut!

Kat..

I wouldn't need forcing wether smell or spunky cunts get to my mouth

PLEASE give us mooooooore!!!!!

Drinking a lovely lady's liquid gold directly from her fountain? And then eating her pussy? All without limitation? In no manner and by no means could that be considered "slavery". Nor is it even punishment. It is, rather, HEAVEN!!!!!