All Comments on 'Words on Skin'

this is my fav <3

One of my favorites ❤

A beautiful story and yes I figured it out early in the story. Loved it! Enjoyed the sexual tension she created and even though she appeared to be a sub, she was really a little dom. Great job! Added to my favs

Boring first couple of chapters

slow buring,loved it,is there going to be a sequel ?

Beautifully written was a bit slow in the beginning but it made sense afterwards can’t wait to read what you have up your sleeve next

i was like "wait, is this meant to be like a heart?"

Boring as hell for the first few chapters but you turned it around for the better thank god.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I really enjoyed your work. Very nice way of getting your thoughts brought to paper. I read alot of all kinds of literature. Your Adventure made me feel I was scooter. Keep writing son. By the way I figured out what lizzie wrote just after their first conversation at it!! Sorry but Keep up the good work

One of the best stories on this site. 5 stars.

believe it or not i was at least hoping that it was a heart after the first few times i saw it. a little more anal than i like, but i understand how that had to happen to explain wanting to do something because of the up coming marriage to Chip. i really like the slow build ups, the back ground, and not just sex sex sex. very good story.

Literally, one of the best and most well written erotic stories, I've ever read...well done. The build up was awesome, and delivery was even better. I've read alot of these stories that go directly to sex...the sex is great, but the build up and getting there is the best part. Beautifully written, keep it up and don't let ANYONE detour u from writing, seriously u were made for it....

I'm not an incester per say but I find it okay in fantasy and this was well written,despite 'Chip" not existing Lizzy was non-virgin by an unnamed character before sex with Richard right?

Absolutely love this story , very beautiful and erotic, thank you :)

Very good one i kinda knew there was something fishy with "chip" and her marriage

Excellent story , really couldn’t pull my self away from this read.

I wish I could give you more than 5 stars! Absolutely beautiful!

Loved it!! Amazing job!! As soon as she was like who is Chip? I knew he was fake lol because he was fishy before that! Great job again!!

You had me fooled. I was guessing that the IMU stood for I Marry U.

With Lizzy giving Richard all of her first-times of everything, I'm extremely disappointed that she didn't save her vaginal cherry for him as well. She thought that from the time she was ten...9 long years, that she was in love with her brother, giving him many firsts, and she let someone else have that one? It deserves an explanation at the very least. On the plus side, I'm really pleased that you had her love her brother so damn much that she not only helped him hook up with her best friend, but even at the end told him straight out that she would share him with other girls and be his lifetime sex toy. That's the ultimate expression of a woman's love for her man IMHO.

Thats an amazing one. Sex story but very heart touched. It could have been a short novel dude

Didn’t figure it out till the end. Great story.

I enjoyed every chapter of this story. I knew as soon as she watched her brother, and her friend have sex that sometime she would have him too. When the name Chip came up I knew that it was a fake. My hope now is that you'll continue this story. You just can't leave it lying there in the sand. Thank you for the best story I've read yet.

Not very macho, I know, but this made me cry. I think back over my own mostly gone life and of opportunity missed for reasons valid and not valid.

To have and hold true emotion, so pure so honest, is indescribable by this guy. And yes, incest is a pure and honest emotion! It was deemed bad by the same group of alter boy fuckers that said pre marital sex is bad and a million things they didn’t get then and never will get.

Live by your heart, not by rules someone else arbitrarily make up, be it love, or damn near anything else. As a famous man once said:”You’re right to swing your fist stops at my nose.”

Sing away, young people! Life is too short to worry as long as you aren’t hurting others doing so.

Love so many things about your story, their "innocent naughty", supportive and competitive relationship was the perfect backdrop for her seduction. My heart sank when she announced her engagement and more so when "Chipp" had claimed her virginity. Wrong as it May be I'm in love with my own sister (no-one knows) as much as Richie and Lizzie are and, apart from Lizzies lusty betrothal to Ritchie, your characters and their interactions were believable. I also missed the I❤U but was More than happy with her revelation. I'll keep wishing. Thanks.

just came back to re-read this for the fourth time. still just as impressed. this isnt sex. this is love, honest and true. take a page from lizzie and rich. love someone the way they love each other.

Very good ☺️! Very hot 🔥! Very romantic 😍!

Love it. Cool

Never figured it out either, till the end. Nice story. Thanx

Good story and very good tag. Naughtiness and niceness work best together.

Great story. Will it have a part two?

Very well written!

Simply the BEST

That was a great ride. For everyone involved, except mom😎

Beautiful story, well written and underlying eroticism throughout. Loved every word.

One of the most well written pieces on this entire website.

I love the story, the characters and everything about thos

This was by far the beautifullest story I ever read. It brought tears to my eyes at the very end. That’s true love.

CRINGE for lizzie when she tells mum about fake marriage

Steaming hot 🔥 loved it.

I was gonna write something about when I figured out what 'imu' meant, but then I realised that this story was released less than a week before my 9th birthday, and the last time you uploaded anything was over 10 years ago. I enjoyed the story and hope that one day you may upload something again

HOT>>>>HOT>>>>HOT

I could not get past the first page. The imagery was all wrong. The author used incomplete thoughts. Was not descriptive enough. How could someone climb around on the bed after being on the floor, and on their knees, and still have a massive penis in their mouth? You can not.

This is in the top 5 stories on literotica. One of my favorite.

Why not continue this?

Well done!

LOVED IT!!! If there were typos or misspellings, don't give a squat. Wonderful story, well done, could read more if you have it in you.

Loved it.....must be rare for a guy....I did figure it out about halfway through.

Really love the story picked up on the two surprises about Midway before the reveal of both

Wonderful, well written story.

It looks like it was written back in 2009, and PacoFear hasn't added anything new since 2013. Too bad, this guy is a great wordsmith and his stories are original and creative.

Obviously 5/5!

Nicely written! Had me hard through the whole story!

This was great. And no, I didn’t until the very last moment. Anne

Well done sexy and erotic

This is my second read of this great story. I think the first read was shortly after it’s release. Sad to say, I couldn’t remember the meaning of “I m u”. I was so involved in the story that it wasn’t important. When finally reaching the end I’m so glad to have forgotten it. Maybe in another 10 or so years, I’ll renew an old acquaintance and discover it again. Thank for the writing! JW

I wish there was a way to recommend this story to all the readers here on literotica. It is that good!

I liked this one a lot! Thanks🥰🥰

A 5 is too low

God this was so lovely to read. True love stories always are. I saw it coming from a mile away but even so still warmed my heart, and other things....

Nice!

I just…. Read this whole thing. It was a great story, thank you.

Sweet, pervy story, well written and edited; best thing I’ve read on this site. Got IMU on p.4. One minor note is that here in the States our wild canines go “ow-owoo” or just “owoo.” Didn’t know about dingo howls but it’s a fun fact!

That was an outstanding story. Thank you so much for sharing it. You put it together amazingly.

Hell, I love Lizzie too... lol. I have never heard a dingo, but have laid under the stars in the mountains in Europe,

and out in New Mexico, and up in the mountains of Washington state and hear the howls of Timber wolves',

and coyotes.... never heard the sound she made, but loved it all the same. Darrell, W Texas

I knew it that chip didn't exist cause of how tight her pussy was

I figured out IMU the second time I read it :)

I've read this several times and each time find something new to appreciate! Plot is good to start and great at finish. Lizzie comes through with all the annoyances and qualities of a little sister, (I know, I have 2!). The brother's struggle with the transition shows a logical & completely believable change from siblings to lovers. Well Done!

Rick of Fla.

Awesomely written, grammatically correct and above all else .... believable. Lovely story. More please.

Great!

Lovely little story, thanks

Endearing read

Very good writing, Paco, and the way you handle dialogue is quite artful. So many stories on this site are way overwritten, but not yours. Please continue writing these intelligent and sexy stories!

Great work!

I was never into anal, but still find your story hot even during the rump-romp scenes. The overall writing is also great, all those little detours, giving the background, painting the picture in all details.

I did guess that there's no Chip after Lizzie forgot his name, from there on it was also easier to decipher the M as not standing for "miss" but to be a heart ;)

Amazing story & characters. Gripped me from beggining to end. The dialogue, the conflict, the struggle were all very real. Congrats!

The Anon two comments before me said pretty much everything I was going to say too lol. Amazing story

On a scale of 1 to 5 stars, this story of yours deserves a 7!

Btw I did not get the imu until about halfway through the explanation paragraph.

Please write more!

I find this to be one of the best imhave ever read, still that way after the second reading. I did notnfigure out the meaning of her drawing! I will read this again. Thank you so very much!

My second reading also.

I could only rate this as 4 stars because of the lack of an ending.

What about his girlfriend?

Do he & his sister ’marry’ & live together?

I’ll definitely tread all your stories because they’re well done & fun but I’d really like a good ending from you.

Bill S.

Never really one for incest stories, but this one was written really well, and the waiting and begging was very erotic! Great writing, definitely got me wet

i generally dont read long stories like this, but it was really good, with all the teasing and leading up to the final sequences. Its My understand that with such a relationship, often comes a pregnancy, then marriage between the two, and their mothers ultimate acceptance and joy that she'll be a grandmother from her own children.

Please write more on this story.

She made him feel jealous and inadequate, and it worked. Sister or not, they're all the same.

FANTASTIQUE

Wonderfully written and loving. I didn't figure out the IMU, but I am a left brain person and take things literally far more often than I should. Anyway, thanks for writing the story.

Two thumbs up

I'm a guy and I was almost shedding happy tears at the end. I thought that imu meant "I miss you". This was a great story. Would love to have some kind of a sequel to this.

Aw! I love this story

It’s so hot and real.

I don’t usually enjoy Anal stories but this one hit the right sweet spot!

Beautiful

Definitely one of the best written brother/sister stories ever. Dunno where you are or if you're even alive, Pack, but I sure as hell hope you're ok and that you'll return to posting after so many years!

Very well written. So few stories on here are able to pull at the heartstrings like this one can. There’s something to be said about a story, novel, or etc that just sticks with you no matter what the subject matter is.

Such a fantastic story. Its been stuck in my head the past few days, so i went back to share my thought on it. It was like a good dream with this perfect dream girl. She were teasing and smiling and giggeling with a perfect personality. As a boy at 17, this is probaly the best story/nobel or anything ever i've read. And the sex arent Even the Best part; its the girl. And anal is kind of a tutn off for me, but this story had me interested all the way through. Already at page number four i was like: "fuck, its going to end soon.". This was like a perfect dream.

Friends or bitches like Jessica are toxic!!

Great story and thankfully we were saved from the drama of their mother!!!

Super hot story! I’d love to have my brother take me like this!!

I'm rereading this for the I don't know how many times. I love it still, I love how you develop the characters and plot, and; of course, how hot it is!!

Lovely story. Even though I tripped to the Chip angle pretty early, you still held my interest to the end. IMU" missed it clean. Bravo!

This remains one of my favorites, even after multiple reads.

Amazing! Easily one of my favorite stories here. I usually print out my favorites, so I can read it whenever and this one...just great. I didn't catch the "IMU" but it was masterfully revealed at the end...and it made perfect sense. Bravo!

Very sexy story. First time reading about acceptable anal. Thanks!

I would love a sequel

The only complaint I had is how in-stride the brother took it that he was having sex with a girl who was both engaged and his sister. Other than that, it was a very enjoyable read.

What a beautiful story. The love and tenderness that you portray between the brother and sister is amazing. You build the forbidden desire they both feel in a spectacular way, and they way you bring it all together is admirable. You truly have an incredible imagination and knack for telling a great story.

One of the few I keep returning too. So we'll done. Great build up, great characters, even better author. Thank you

Loved it! Thanks for writing and sharing with us!

Great buildup, characterisations, und ending!

11/10 Bawoos!!!!!