All Comments on 'Work and Play Pt. 14'

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OnimOnimover 3 years ago
Well Done!!

Please keep telling your story the way you are doing...it's beautifully done, the writing is quite awesome!! Gabe may be a tad out of Zeke's league at first, but I think they're moving in the right direction...toward their centers...might have to give Zeke a zanax or two, and a bit of a reality check for his continuous naivety, but it's all good!!

Awkward12Awkward12over 3 years ago

Love it! Always a good day when you upload another chapter! Also I appreciate you taking a realistic approach to the characters, makes it more interesting in my opinion 😊

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
I love Zeke

As someone with anxiety disorder and is a very high functioning Autistic person, I find it refreshing to see a story where the main character is highly misunderstood. It’s also nice to see the other people around him grow to accept him for who he is & challenge him to get better with communication. I think Zeke & Gabe make a good couple & they have hot sex!! I can’t wait to see where this story take us! Loving it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

You left on a cliffhanger...how dare youuuu? Noooo...how long do I have to wait for Zeke to get all flustered and red haha ... but seriously great writing. Thank you for the read! <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Noooooo cliffhanger

I binge read the entire story. I love, love, love it. Gabe and Zeke together are fire. I do think Zeke made a mistake spilling to Harper but time will tell. Please don't make us wait too long for an update, I'm flying to know what happens next and if Zeke will copy to his relationship with Gabe to Shannon. Great job! This story is awesome!

hero101hero101over 3 years agoAuthor
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thanks for reading! thanks for your feedback! I'm so glad that you all can connect with characters on a personal level. Looking through, I definitely see mistakes in the chapter, but hey, it happens. Thanks again for reading, you all are great. new parts are coming soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
A cliffhanger, really?

Wow Gabe really is a 'big gestures' kinda guy huh, what a way to come out. Also please stop leaving us with clif hangers T0T. Fucking awesome Wrighting as usual, me and many others look forward to the update xx

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Part 15?

When is the next part coming? It's been so long. Great story and I can't wait. It seems like you're not really invested in it or interested in completing it which breaks my heart. Hope you're uploading the next part soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
I'm so happy for them

I'm so happy where this is going ! I love the story line and that Shannon actually is catching up this time! Really, really hope that Harper actually won't ruin anything and that Clay just rots in jail!!

readerfeederreaderfeederover 2 years ago

Just read all the chapters over two days ... please update soon!

Bluepoohstar08Bluepoohstar08over 2 years ago

please please finish this story!!!!

dnsontndnsontnabout 2 years ago

I could easily fill this comment box with every superlative I know and then go dig out my thesaurus and add more praise. Jeezus this is impeccable. Not at all mad that it’s a cliffhanger, not one little bit. I have happily spent every free moment reading it over two days. I have a new hero, hero101 !!!

Laura1234Laura1234about 2 years ago

Oh my- so good!!! I hadn’t realized the story wasn’t finished! Hopefully there will be more in the next year or so! (Or even sooner!). I see there was a three year break earlier in the series

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Can’t get enough of this story. Devastated it isn’t finished. I need to know what happens!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Love this story! More more more please!!

milanonmilanonalmost 2 years ago

Dear hero101,

I surely love this story very much, and since I do so, I would like to ask you, how is it possible for an author to leave his readers with such a gap between posting chapters? I just read the story all at once and noticed this happened a few years back, with you taking a gap of three years between chapters. Now is been almost two since this last one. Do you think you might resume posting? A few reassuring words, in one way or another, would be surely welcomed by all of us in love with this story. Thanks so much, Roberto

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I need this concluded!! To me it feels like a TV show, I’m so invested in the characters now and absolutely gutted there’s no more chapters! Please, please finish this. I’d be happy to contribute to a tip jar even...

Elle_LeighElle_Leighover 1 year ago

Please come back and finish this series! The character development and storyline is so intriguing and an emotional investment that deserves to be finished. Please don't leave your fans hanging! We are eagerly waiting for the next chapter! Please!!! We miss Zeke and Gabe!

DickbrokemyheartDickbrokemyheartover 1 year ago

I was curious about this story, but I alway click on the last chapter to see the comments, and reading not finished,

red flag, so no read.

latinsymbole3latinsymbole3about 1 year ago

Just wanted to leave some encouragement - your stories are amazing! Thank you for sharing them with us :) I'm sure you are busy but I will keep fingers crossed for a next installment of this captivating story.

jroseemijroseemiabout 1 year ago

Oh lord, you can't just leave us there. Please come back and finish this.

GrayerUnionGrayerUnion12 months ago

I LOVE this story, I cannot wait for more!!

ZfosterZfoster9 months ago

Please continue writing!! I need to know what happens

remy247remy2478 months ago

So you leave us hanging. Are you going to finish this???

Hedonism61Hedonism614 months ago

I’ve been enjoying this. Are you planning on finishing it?

Bhamguy3Bhamguy328 days ago

I would be sad not to be able to see this story end. I sincerely hope the author intends to complete this piece because it was done very well.

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