All Comments on 'Working for my sister in-law'

I love this as a beginning and can hardly wait for the next chapter. 5 stars. keep it going.

Good story but you need someone to edit your work nothing serious just typos and change in gender in a couple places. Spell chech and editing can take care of everything but good work.

YES!!!! Please write part 2

The story was good, you just need an editor

Awesome, covered most of my most intimate fantasies - thank you and more please !

great story can't wait for next part

Completely unappealing male character.

Fucking cheaters.

No disrespect muskyboy but being a 60+ year-old that used to be a pear-shaped and with the body image that will probably never change, it was nice to read a story about a physically unattractive man that was golden inside and out. Great story fantastic development can’t wait to read the next chapter.

Good story. Please give it a good edit before posting ch. 2.

Really good, you are making it work!

There was a tiny bit of a "rush to kiss her over her pussy" early, without much build up, but things went swimmingly after that.

Keep it up (that's for our hero as well)!

REALLY ENJOYED IT. I look forward to part 2

Thank God no part 2 hopefully it won't come

Started out as a nice love story, then you lost me with the waitress.