by YoungGriff
Fun story, can't wait to see what happens next. Some grammar could be straightened out a bit, but other than that, I like it. Rarely do you find an erotic story that is just as much a compelling plot as it is hot.
The "she wasn't as tight as a virgin, but her cunt wasn't tooooo used up yet" trope is bullshit, really ruined the story for me
Could do with more emotion/thought, IMO.
If this was about people who lived in a Free Use world and it was all they knew, then writing about how they casually went about their day would be fine.
Here, we have someone whose sense of normalcy is different. He goes around fucking and groping as he pleases, which is fine, but the fact that he doesn't seem to think much of it... seems kind of boring to me.
I'll give props for it being a functional(ish) Free Use world though. I was never a fan of the "you must interrupt whatever you're doing and delay your plans" Free Use scenarios unless it was a full-on enslavement.
You may or may not know this, but there actually is an SCP which is a portal to a free use world. SCP 3651.