All Comments on 'World Travelers Ch. 01'

by Aaroneous

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MarassoMarasso7 months ago

Wow, what a great story! I was so disappointed when it so abruptly ended. What a cliffhanger! I want to see more of it and the development of Melody's and David's relationship. Hopefully, they will overcome their differences and he will be less of the douchebag and she also lose her entitlement :) Once again, amazing story, and thank you for sharing it!

Frankenstein1962Frankenstein19627 months ago

Great story! Like your other stories, this one has me on the edge waiting for the next chapter. Keep busy writing! Cheers. Frankie

Cyberweasel89Cyberweasel896 months ago

This has to be the lowest breast fetishism content I've ever seen from a boob-focused story.

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In an effort to expand my literary horizon, I just submitted the first part of a twelve chapter romance series. Give “Facets of Love” a read and let me know what you think.