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Click here"You did very well, darling," she murmured, and I melted against her, disarmed by this new-found tenderness. Meanwhile, Beth was gently massaging my shaking thighs and placing fluttering kisses on my face and Elle's.
I drifted into a heady sleep, intoxicated by the scent of us and lulled by their soothing touch. When I woke, my head was on Beth's chest, her arm around me, and Elle was gone.
Feeling me stir, Beth kissed my head lightly and brushed a strand of hair out of my face. I was reminded of that first, breathtaking gesture, that day in her office: how strange, in such a short time, for it to feel so natural.
"Elle's making some dinner," she said softly, "if you'd like to stay."
I looked up at her, still hazy from sleep, and nodded.
"Good," she replied, smiling at me. Then, with a now-familiar look of concern: "are you alright? Was any of that-"
"It was wonderful," I replied truthfully before she could finish. "It was...a lot, but good," I added, as memories of our afternoon came back to me. "Was I...was it okay for you?"
"You were perfect," Beth said tenderly, pulling me closer to her and turning to face me, her lips tantalizingly close to mine.
Morrre please! You write so well, the characters are so believable and the erotic tension palpable. Love this series xx
this was such a well written story. i truly hope you come back to it for a chapter 4
I love this! I’m obsessed with this series honestly. You’re a fantastic writer, and you do the build and execution so well. I love Elle’s character - As an experienced sub myself, I love the different flavours of domination. I love a soft caregiver domme and a strict, harsh domme with exacting standards too. It’s great to see the different dynamics play out. I hope you continue
This is such a fantastic piecie! I was worried that this part will never come but it was so worth the wait! I love all the tension and the chemistry between the characters, I also love that everything is clearly consentual and wanted by all parties. Again, so hot!
So happy you came back to continue this story!! Would kill to know what Elle and Beth whisper to one another. Love your work!
Absolutely stunning! I was waiting eagerly for the continuation of this story. Please don't stop writing. You're a such a talented writer!
Actually, I like Elle. I like the whole story. A lot. I think Elle and Beth have different styles, but I don't either of them as being in any way bad or untrustworthy. I think this is beautifully written and mad hot, and I thank you for it. I hope you continue.
One of the interesting things to me is that you can take a conversation between the characters, or a small gesture by the characters, and give it more heat than most people's sex scenes. You do slow burn, buildup and anticipation really well.
First let me tell you how glad I am to read another part of this series (I did not dare to expect that, honestly). The setting is fresh and interesting, your writing vivid, and your characters captivating (Beth, especially). That said, I am not very fond of Elle. Call me too vanilla or maybe you are are just laying the basis for the things to come, but I feel Elle is ultimately just a coldhearted bitch that won't do Rosa any good. Rosa may be eager and open to try new things, but hopefully she keeps some sense of self-worth in the end. Beth, on the other side, may be good advisor in this regard, too. Please, continue! Best, A