All Comments on 'XXX Experimentation Ch. 02'

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WargamerWargamerover 3 years ago

Beware!!

Another cuck rubbish tale.

AVOID!!

Scores 1/5

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Can’t wait for the next action, will he fuck her brains out?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
BARF!

That covers it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
ended

You ended it before you should have. You do not need a next story, you should have continued the story.

IFAFILHGIFAFILHGover 3 years ago
WHY

Why did you end the story without her getting fucked? Book!!

fishgetterfishgetterover 3 years ago

This needs a lot of work and at least 3 more chapters, especially if they are as short as these 2 are.

Black_and_White_WriterBlack_and_White_Writerover 3 years ago

A lovely story and enjoying both parts. A nice, slow build up to a nicely paced story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Keep going!

Don’t end it here, ready for the next chapter.

26thNC26thNCabout 2 years ago

1 Star

Cuck garbage.

26thNCuck Disapproved

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I am a writer of fiction, and artist and love old Science Fiction and Horror films and comics. I’ve been here for years and enjoyed many hours reading, and I thought blimey! I’d best publish something, so I have. Coming Soon XXX Experimentation.

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