All Comments on 'Xyla'

Hello, JimBob44, and thank you for sharing this story with us. I found it to be very well-written and enjoyable. Merry Christmas, and please have five stars from me.

It's not a conventional love story but considering these two characters personalities it might average out to a pretty stable relationship. The one thing that puzzles me is why would the bitter old bat leave nearly 3 times more inheritance to the son she seemed to hate so much?

Was it because like Xyla pain was her way of showing love or was it she figured the two were going to marry?

All in all it was pretty good, would have liked to read about their actual penetrative sex but maybe that's only for birthdays.

Loved it! Laughed my ass off through most of it and especially laughed at the absurd deaths and downturns of luck of a few of the characters. I enjoyed this story thoroughly.

This story. Had a great laugh at Manny, but was happy the step father got the shaft in the end. Great job and 5 stars for you.

Well push my buttons, I'm glad no balls were seriously hurt in the wrighting of this story. I have second thoughts about drunk driving, the drunks always live. Everyone was ok in the end.

What a wonderfully weird story! JB44's mind apparently doesn't work exactly like most folks' (just as Stephen King's mind is different from most folks') - which gives us the privilege of reading some off-the-wall literature that's truly entertaining. Thanks JB44!

Interesting premise.

But written in a way to make it as poor as possible.

Certainly Manny watched porn. She never asked him what kind. Or how often. Or what kinds of scenes/scenarios made him cum.

Or whether he masturbated to thoughts of her. How often? What did he imagine?

The eating dirty asses and pussies was a real turn off. Ugh.

Never did she fondle his cock and balls. Never did she edge him. Never did she deny him the opportunity to cum. Never did she make him beg to cum. Or make him beg to eat her pussy.

Three stars -- being generous.

The fact that so many people thought this abusive man hating shit was "good" is thoroughly depressing, though not surprising. The fact that Manny's still stuck married to the evil heartless bitch is worse. Wish i could give this -100

I loved it. A little dark but hey it’s make believe. I can’t believe some people's comments like it was based on a true story. Five stars. Thanks for sharing your work with us.