Yachting with My Sister Pt. 02

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"Let's go," Jeff said, as a black SUV pulled up to the curb.

All four were inside quickly and pulling away when three police cars pulled up in front of the club.

Julie, who had been apprehensive about being followed, was now grateful they had been.

"Where are we going?" Julie asked.

"Home. Liberty rule, after a security incident, we're in for the night," Lori explained. She looked at Tina and Jeff, "Sorry, I got complacent. It won't happen again. Thanks."

Both invisibles nodded. As they pulled up to the pier another man and woman waited for them. There were three others standing near the gangplank of Jeff's yacht.

Surrounded now by seven invisibles, they were ushered to Jeff's yacht. Two stayed on the pier after they boarded and the other's dispersed.

Jeff came out and greeted them. "You're back early," he said.

Lori was explaining what had happened to Lee. He was impressed at how effective the security was. Lori's phone rang.

She listened for less than a minute before saying, "Yes, ma'am," and ending the call.

Lori turned to Julie.

"Diljan wants to see you and me in her office ASAP. She said we can finish our date on the Liberty tonight."

"Lori, I think we'll be fine here," Julie replied.

"Probably, but that's not the point. She's my Captain. I follow her orders. Our safety is her priority at the moment. I suspect we're both going to get a lecture on what not to do with our drinks."

"Thank her for me," Jeff requested.

"I will. You can come too, Lee," Lori replied.

"No thanks. I'm staying in for the night."

When they stepped back onto the pier, the two women were escorted to the Liberty.

Jeff poured himself a drink and sat outside thinking. The evening could have had a much worse ending if Maureen's security team hadn't been there, he realized.

*****

At 9 am, Monday morning, Diljan and three others came to the Jules. Lee and Julie greeted them.

"Ready," Diljan asked.

"All set," Lee replied.

"Lee, Julie, these are our three new crew members. They are Carolina, Diana, and April."

They were as stunning as the original crew. Carolina was tall, like Olga. She was black, slim, and stacked. Diana was blonde, a little shorter than Carolina, but equally as gorgeous. April was a tiny redhead and every bit as attractive as the others. All three wore the blue and white duty uniforms of the Liberty.

Julie turned to her brother. "You're a dead man."

"Yeah, but what a way to go," Lee agreed.

This is where I'm ending this strange tale. I have no plans for further chapters. If someone else wants to tackle that - you have my blessing.

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wrc264wrc2643 months ago

Bummer, really hate it when an author drops a story when has only really gotten started.

Gunther22Gunther227 months ago

This is one of my favorite stories, I just finished reading it for the fourth time. I laugh every time when Maureen has her two henchmen throw Lee overboard.

WeissbiermannWeissbiermann7 months ago

Fun and sexy! Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

In my opinion, the story got to be too much sex with not enough plot/character development to background the sex ... good writing otherwise

Cjmach1Cjmach110 months ago

It's not over so no rating yet!

DreamWeaverDreamWeaver12 months ago

Loved the slight humor and I'd like to see a new chapter on their trip, specially Lee trying to take care of the 5 off duty crew

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

DocWords - Spoilsport!

ScottishTexanScottishTexanabout 1 year ago

You sir, have been watching actors perform pornagraphy way too much. (Notice that I correctly used the double 'o' format for 'to'. Your editor missed your mistake.) Quoting:

"...Diljan slowed, then pulled out. Lori immediately began tonguing Julie's gaping ass."

DISGUSTING AND NASTY! Porn stars have multiple enemas before they do an act like this to be certain that the bowels have been thoroughly flushed of ALL feces. This act performed as you described it would have resulted in Lori eating Julie's shit which would have more than likely given her a disease. My first wife's brother is gay and became sick with Salmonella after rimming his boyfriend.

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I really didn't see the point of ruining Julie and Lori's date with the attack considering that you had already planned on ending the story before Leeland and Julie even boarded the Liberty for the extended cruise. In fact, your choice of where to wrap your story made little sense at all. This chapter was a let down compared with the first one.

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I also wanted to point out that if Leeland and Julie BOTH held crushes for each other prior to Julie getting married, something should have happened to clue in either one or the other that there was something stronger between them. The two of them suddenly finding out that they had feelings for each other that had lain repressed for ten years or longer felt extremely contrived. 4/5

G5902G5902about 1 year ago

Ohhh, this is such a great storyline and you are an amazing writer, ohhh woo is me, I wish that you had continued this story!!! Truly, thank you for sharing this wonderful story and I will enjoy my imagination running wild with this theme. In the meantime, I have now found your writings and I look forward to reading more of your stories. Again, thank you!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

would be 5 stars just wish there was another chapter

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