by nicolediamond
Enjoyed the storyline theme of "Yes, Katya" very much. An interesting spin on FLR, well done.
Welp, let's see, as it's not a full belt he can easily pull himself put the back of his cage and slip his balls through the gap between cage and ring one at a time (use lube of course) and be out of the cage without need for his precious key. Or, just because the key and lock is one of a kind dosent mean it can't be picked!
The beauty of reality always makes vapid fantasy stories like this just that. Fantasy. No cage is secure, no lock unpickable, and hopefully no women like this are actually real because damn would they be annoying to be around. Demanding brats who want everything but do nothing in return.
For fucks sake. This isn’t BDSM, it’s just abuse. Sure, an abusive husband might bestvthe shot out of his wife, but she knows how he really feels about her when he is tender and gentle with her.
Fuck you.
Marvelous. Engaging. It made me daydream. I hope there is a sequel.
a Femdom adept
Very amusing the people who read a story just to complain about it. You already read it, you were here. Are you so angry out of shame? It's okay, it's just a story. It's not made to be realistic, it's made to please a specific kink. If it's not your kink or not pleasurable to you, then avoid the tag. Simple.
Well written and a nice pace. Reminds me of a book I just read, "Finding Love Through Female Domination." This kind of total enslavement is a little beyond my personal fantasies, but well worth taking the time to enjoy it. Easily in the 5 star category.
the ending is nearly romantic, how love and submission are intertwined. How the control of Katya is complete. Even so complete one wonders is there life after this? I am truly curious, like others, to see if you can manage to have this story continue and reaching new levels of submission. New levels of desire and power. For now, thank you for the sublime story!
Haven't been to Literotica in a year (since the war started), rather nice to encounter such a fairly decent chastity story!
Regarding the detractors in the comments - if I were to nitpick, I would focus on how a large section of the tale is devoted to mundane household chores (maid fetish?), but the ending deals with permanent chastity - which is a much more fantastical fetish. That could be a logical disconnect.
And if I were to touch on the subject of abuse, my personal view is that I somewhat dislike the "deal" system of this story - sure, it's relatively fair, and only mildly manipulative, but it still feels way too conditional for my tastes. (And leaving behind my objectivity, I myself would rather see a male orgasm as a "seal of approval" of sorts for what happens next - although I do admit that it's not an objective critique. But hey, considering how folks here have called it "abuse", I feel like you may excuse my verbiage.)
Loved this story. Captures that fantasy many of us s-types have of being found out and desired for what we are. Most importantly it’s well written. Can’t wait to read your other work.
The issue with this story is that most of these women move on to another slave and stop caring about you almost all the time It's happened to me and my friends. And then they wonder why you lose your mind and hold them accountable. After they have wrecked you for every other woman. Good story though I like it.
This was such a great story, I still think you could add more chapters to the story in the future :)