All Comments on 'Yes, Mommy Ch. 01'

How could she pull her panties down when she wasn't wearing any? Loved it besides that glaring mistake. Kinda killed it from that point on

Really sweet & hot story. I'm not a fan of the whole usie of "mommy" or "daddy" in erotica. Just seems stupid & infantilizes the character when she should be celebrated. It'd be a much more mature gender affirmative story without Jessie shouting ”Mommy” every sentence & it demeans the lesbian character as well. Haven't checked your bio hut this seems very much a male fantasy written by a straight man. Not a 5 star story yet but it's very very good.

In some ways it a caricature on how trans girls are .. Hey its a story and you smoked it so well . Its funny I can be sub with some but mostly domme ;-)

I want this. thank you. I hope you continue the story!

THIS IS SO FUCKING HOT!!! I just love this story. This is my fantasy for my wife to do to me.

OMG this is so hot, more please

Loved your story. Curious if Jessi will eventually find a job or just take over Henry’s position at the company.

Loved the use of Age Play in your writing, and would love to see it used outside of the bedroom. (Though I’m biased, I’m a Daddy dom with my little girl).

@CliterateDyke, Age play is a kink for a good number of people. Men/Women/NonBinary. What seems silly or demeaning to one is empowering to another.

Mmmm......I loved this story! I could be Jessi. I could be Mona. Oh my, what a delicious erotic relationship!

Your patience in developing characters and layered motivations gives the sensual scenes a depth from which they can reach toe curling heights.

Thankyou. Keep working on this craft. I love your take on a positive female aggressor in Mona. The

Please make a Ch.2

Please for all that is good and sexy in this world I need you to write more of this beautiful work of art. It's so hard to find stuff on here with actually decent and accurate LGBT, especially the T, representation and you have done it! So as a transgender woman myself, I beg of you for more!

I want this in my life so much. Well-written queer smut is so hard to find. Please continue, and If you write a second chapter, it would be wonderful if you involved some fisting.

Thanks for your patience - senior year has been kicking my ass, but commencement is right around the corner, and once I'm done with university I can devote all my energies to making more of this for all of you. Thank you for your support and sorry again for that panty plot hole. More will definitely come, dont you worry! Might even coincide with a much, MUCH larger world...

All my love,

ThatTransDyke666 xoxo

Would love to see their relationship further in Ch2.

Please continue this story, it is so good!

Wish I had a Mona in my life. I wouldn't address her as mommy, rather I'd call her mistress. Lucky Jessi! Reading this caused a wet spot in my pink panties. mmm tastes so good.

Probably not a priority at this point I know, but this is a wonderful story and I'd love to see another chapter!

I can't express my admiration for you @ThatTransDyke666 for such a wonderful, emotional story. If I could, I would give you 10 ⭐ stars. I would love to have such a friend, my dominant lady, as you presented here in the form of Mona.

I fell in love and felt close to Henry/Jessi, I want to be like him/her.

I am looking forward to the future of Jessi and Mona with great interest and great impatience. What will Jessi and Mona become for each other? What boundaries will they have to cross and what else will they experience in their friendship, or perhaps love? Will they form a common relationship? 🧒🏻♀️👧🏻❤️👱🏻‍♀️.

ps. Sorry for any mistakes and linguistic inaccuracies, but I don't speak English.

SissyBoy from Warsaw, Poland. 👩🏻‍🦳♀️👧🏻❤️👩🏻♀️🧑🏻.

❤️❤️❤️

Nie umiem wyrazić swojego zachwytu dla Ciebie @ThatTransDyke666 za tak wspaniałą, emocjonalną historię. Jakbym mogła to bym dał/a Ci 10 ⭐ gwiazdek. Bardzo chciał/a bym mieć taką przyjaciółką, swoją dominującą Panią jaką przedstawiłaś tutaj w postaci Mony.

Zakochał/am/em i zżył/em/am się w osobie Henry/Jessi, chcę być jak On/a.

Z wielkim zainteresowaniem, ogromną niecierpliwością wypatruję dalszych losów Jessi i Mony. Czym się dla siebie staną Jessi i Mona? Jakie granice będą musiały przekroczyć i co jeszcze doświadczą w swojej znajomości, a może miłości? Czy stworzą wspólny związek? 🧒🏻♀️👧🏻❤️👱🏻‍♀️.

ps. Przepraszam za błędy i niedokładności językowe ale nie znam języka angielskiego.

SissyBoy z Warszawy, Polska. 👩🏻‍🦳♀️👧🏻❤️👩🏻♀️🧑🏻.

Super hot, I love the way you characterized the dynamic of a transfem sissy with a mommy dom. Very fun to see the pair go back and forth between degrading and loving feminization, as a kink and as a gender expression. Reminded me of scenes I do with my partner. Great story.