by Exogenous
The love between the characters is so wonderfully apparent as the ritual and punishment unfold, and that makes this story all the more powerful. This is the first time I have read one of your stories, but I have a strong suspicion it will NOT be the last!!!
I absolutely adore this story... far and away the best I have read here. Not only is it totally hot and arousing, but it is such a beautiful evocation of a real love affair. Thank you...
Absolutely beautiful...I love the "bunches and bunches" at the end... I could see myself saying that to S..
Besides being smoking hot, this story was amazing in its portrayal of an actual relationship. I'm sending this to my Master in hopes of something similar.