All Comments on 'Yes, Please!'

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WFEATHERWFEATHERabout 19 years ago
An Amazing and Powerful Tale

The love between the characters is so wonderfully apparent as the ritual and punishment unfold, and that makes this story all the more powerful. This is the first time I have read one of your stories, but I have a strong suspicion it will NOT be the last!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Beautiful...

I absolutely adore this story... far and away the best I have read here. Not only is it totally hot and arousing, but it is such a beautiful evocation of a real love affair. Thank you...

HottieMamaHottieMamaabout 17 years ago
Wonderful...

Absolutely beautiful...I love the "bunches and bunches" at the end... I could see myself saying that to S..

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Amazing...

Besides being smoking hot, this story was amazing in its portrayal of an actual relationship. I'm sending this to my Master in hopes of something similar.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
aww

i loved the ending so sweet

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