All Comments on 'Yet Another Alba Story'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Welcome back!

I really missed your writting, but it was well worth it. This was a fantastic finish 2 your Jessica Alba story, thank you. I hope your new Dark Angel comes soon. Thanks again.

KMB2476KMB2476almost 12 years ago

This was quite well done. You really told a story here and not just about two people fucking. You had real personalities at work here and that made things so much better. Good job.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

This story was great and I'm hoping it will not be your last Alba story. I'm also looking forward to you Dark Angel story. Very glad to see you writing again.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

I'm a huge fan of your writing. Luv the way you can take explicid material a damn hot celeb like Alba and spin into more than just smut, you are a gifted writer, and I hope you honor us with anoter work of art soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Alba

Please keep up with the Alba stories. You're one of the best and I check Literotica sometimes just to see if you've posted another Alba tale. (Pardon the pun) Anyway! Keep up the good work and Keep the Alba stories coming. (Pardon the pun again)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Wow- really Wow! Read all your Jessica Alba work and its SO hot, will you please do another???

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Very good

Great story and solid sequel with hot sex scenes. Very good :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Nice

Nice! Jessica Alba being unfaithful is just so fucking hot. Personally, I think it would

have been much more kinky and naughty if she had let him come inside her. Going back to her husband with another man's seed in her womb.... But I loved it, like your other Jessica Alba stories. Please write more.

MrMister2018MrMister2018over 5 years ago
NICE!

Nice! Jessica Alba being unfaithful is just so fucking hot. Personally, I think it would

have been much more kinky and naughty if she had let him come inside her. Going back to her husband with another man's seed in her womb.... But I loved it, like your other Jessica Alba stories. Please write more about her.

MrMister2018MrMister2018over 5 years ago
Nice!

Nice! Jessica Alba being unfaithful is just so fucking hot. Personally, I think it would

have been much more kinky and naughty if she had let him come inside her. Going back to her husband with another man's seed in her womb.... But I loved it, like your other Jessica Alba stories. Please write more

Mojo648Mojo648over 5 years ago
Review.

Please write more about Jessica Alba and her sexual encounters with this guy. But make the story s longer.

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