All Comments on 'You'

You blindfold her with the red silk tie, which is fine, but then go on to say in the next paragraph you see fear in her eyes... how? Other than that, good story.

The start was great, but please make the difference between someone who wants to be dominat and someone who can please a woman with domination. go on

What a wonderful first story. You conjured up some very vivid mental images and I particularly enjoyed that. Keep up the good work.