All Comments on 'You Belong to Me'

Should be in the sci-fi & fantasy category.

should be in the bin me thinks total crap wont even give it a score

Thanks to both anons for their comments. I published the wrong story for the description, didn't I? I'm new here. I promise I'll get better and to the anon that said this story sucks, I definitely agree. Sci-fi isn't my normal genre but someone requested a demon story and I wrote two of them. Both suck. I need work in this area. I alway appreciate honest feedback! Kisses. I have no clue how to fix/correct this story. Anyone know?

Yes it needs work lbut good writing skills take time to learn. Keep at it you will improve. I love the work on here. I may try my hand at it soon myself. Don't let anyone discourage you. Keep at it.

I remember reading this story quite awhile back and liked it then. I can see how it freaks people out. Demonic possession does that, unless your a demon. Lol.