All Comments on 'You Can’t Stop Me Ch. 02'

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Sidney43Sidney43almost 12 years ago

This is a really interesting story so far. Carmen is presented as a psycho stalker type young woman who has fixated on Robert, but is she really? I can see in the next chapter that Steve is going to get the full fury of Carmen when he tries his pathetic moves on her and Robert will likely step in. Will be interesting to see if Steve is still a room mate after the dust settles.

bruce22bruce22over 11 years ago
Wild Relationship

This really hooked and wonder where it is going!

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
A LOT OF TRANSFERENCE

with a smattering of Voodoo Magic. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Anxious

I want to keep reading, but I feel like its going to be a tragedy, so I have to stop here

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

An intriguing story. Just a reminder: “I” is always the subject of a verb; it is never an object. One does not give something to “I.” “Me” is the object of a verb, “She gave it to Carmen and me.”

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