All Comments on 'You Can't Do That'

Different,but good.

Of course now if it was real he would be wondering if she is going to step outside of the relationship.

Excellent ending!

Great story

Awesome story! 5⭐️

Home run.

Nice story.

does Sue state, "it definitly wont be you" when talking on the the phone to Bill if they are brother and sister?

This was great. Laughed my ass off

A short story with a lot of truth in it. One of the best.

Perfect story-line!!!!

That was fun (again).

What a completely shitty RAAC story! And a wimpy cuckold story! Not worth reading or rating.

Great story! The premise and the POV were different and fresh (at least from the stories i've read so far).

On one hand, i thought Sue got off REAL light. Why would Jerry or Bill trust her? Why not expect her to try later and just keep it secret?

The revelation that they're brother/sister makes it believable. A loving, smart, and wise family would know that taking a hammer to her skull had the desired effect; that she was honest in her response.

Well done.

Dlh143 - NOW YOU KNOW HOW PEOPLE FEEL ABOUT YOUR COMMENTS - definitely not worth reading and with that . . . .

. . .great story though! 5 stars

I liked this story - 5 for you again

I don't read many stories more than once. Some I've read twice and a very select few I've read more than twice. This is one of those stories. I love this story and never tire of it. HDK says it perfectly and completely.

why oh why didn't he divorce. At least startle divorce and make her feel some pain.

Oldie but a goody. Reread this again. HDK nails down the whole outside lover thing. I still laugh each time I read the last line!

A very succinct story about the dangers of being selfish and feeling entitled . Many products of the mass media seem to be made with the intention to instill the feeling of self-entitledness in certain target groups.

HDK tells us here how somebody feeling entitled can fall on the ass, if the people in this person's social surrounding aren't as stupid as the dumbed down personage of some silly TV-show.

Great story!😁🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

This was a very foolish premise with an even worse ending. Anyone who would disrespect you so completely and absolutely by telling you they're taking a lover can't be forgiven. Its saying you don't matter in a marriage. Moreover anyone who can't stand up for themselves when they're told this doesn't deserve a faithful wife. You are owed nothing in this world. Not even respect. It has to be earned and at times taken. If the husband is such a wimp to just accept such a situation he deserves to be cheated on

One of the best speeches to an almost cheating wives that I’ve read in LW. A classic.

Loved it

The last 2 lines made me laugh... Wasn't expecting that twist... Brilliant story, the unique foundation of the story can tear down the strongest relationships in mere seconds... Loved the phone calls... Easily 5 Stars...

So she recants. Then he starts to think about it. Why did she want this? Is there something wrong with me? Is she going to do it behind my back? I have to watch her now. Do I want to?

Maybe I ought to try Karen out. Have her tell me if I still measure up.

So she cut his balls off, created doubt about their marriage, made him suspicious of her and opened her self up to reprisal. And if he is as described he stands a much better chance than she does of trading up.

Loved it and especially the twist ending!

Great to the point story.

Nice

Read this before. Just goes to show not all women (or men) are cheaters. Sometimes you just need to think a little. Just come to your senses and realize what you can lose. Five stars for brains.

Nice twist

5-stars & Favorite

Which one of the bowling team thought this one up?? Hilarious, 5*s

I have read this story a few times and still get a chuckle from it. Very well done HDK yes very well done indeed.

Damn great story! I’m impressed!

This is a outstanding story and is straight to the point. This life style will never work for long.

Please more stories. Thank you

divorce the whore.

Perfect story from conception through execution.

Ahhh, The grass on the other side is greener until someone desires the grass on your side. that's the time to get possessive and defensive of what you have. Sue's gonna take good care of Jerry from now on. LP

friends will do what ever it takes. TK U MLJ LV NV

Very amusing!

A second read and a good arguement for for a spouce who is considering jumping the for the grass on the other side.

Friends that we need. There were many claimed to be friends rather than correcting their friend's way when they deviated but rather not intervene and let them go astray, the 'their problem not mine' mindset

5 stars. We all need friends like Bill, Mary and Karen to keep us honest.

Love the surprise at the ending! Great brother looking out for the family. Thank-you for this story

Great story and nice to see the good guys and gals rally together to bring sense to the table.

Good story. Only if she's his sister, she wouldn't say "You can bet your ass that you won't be the man I choose", small plot hole there.

Outstanding!

Superb.

An oldie but a goodie. Some stories get better with age, and this is one of those that do.

Thanks HDK. Please write another.

Surprise !

"Jerry, my good friend and brother-in-law, NEVER trust my sister and verify every action she takes!" said Bill the following day.

5stars straight

Still should have dumped the idiot, laughed in her face and go with the widow.

LOL

Scared straight.

Should divorce anyway! She chose against her husband. Doesn’t matter that she decided not to go through with it. That’s still massive disrespect. If he keeps her, he has to worry about it for the rest of his life.

ZK

I'm not sure about divorce, but a separation is warranted. Plus maybe he should lose a little weight? Sue needs to know what it'd be like if she's divorced. Otherwise, the story wasn't all that, def not what I expected. Too much BS. I've liked other stories from this author, but oh, no, not this. 2 stars Bob

Second time that I’ve read this, a very well thought out story. Very glad to hear that Sue didn’t jump off the cliff!

I've read this a couple of times through. The time before this was a long time ago and I have to apologize to HDK. I only gave this 4 stars before. But it definitely deserves 5

If my wife ever told me she had the intention of fucking an other man, our marriage would be over at that moment. She could never be trusted again.

Love the different perspective compared to most LW stories.

At the start when he called asking to speak to the cuck I just knew Bill was an asshole. Turns out he's one hell of a good friend and brother.

Unusual story thanks.

Well done.

It's been a while since I read this, had forgotten the ending!

HDK delivers again! Short but brilliant, 5 stars.

I loved this story, the last two sentences raised it to 6 stars.

Loved it.

This was hilarious!

Brilliant.

great ,i like the humor too

Even a blind squirrel can find a nut now & then. The cuck master finally gets one right. 5 stars +

And funny too!

Bill S.

Meh. 3 stars for the humor, but honestly it deserved 2 stars for implication that Jerry will keep the inconsiderate, unempathetic unloving POS woman, instead of getting a divorce, regardless of whether she took a fucktoy or not.

Plus, the garbage trope of "oh I love her so much I'm willing to be a cuck". Almost no normal man is that dumb.

Loved it! What a wonderful tail. Bill is a great friend and Jerry is very lucky. Sue and Mary both got an eye-opening lesson on counting their blessings. Way to go big brother, two birds, one stone.

Does anyone have Karens phone number?

Very clever !

LOL, dump her anyway and invite Karen over for dinner. at the "Y"?

5 stars. Oh this was just priceless. LOL!!!

Wow what a well told story. The ending was awesome.

One small nit to pick….when she told Bill she wouldn’t choose him (before we found out they were siblings) he should have said he wouldn’t fuck her diseased pussy with triple condoms as long as she was going to fuck any swinging dick that came along. ;-)

5 *

Great story, I liked that it was Karen who opened her eyes and validated what she was being told

Great story, most people don't realize what they have until it's to late. The grass isn't necessarily greener someplace else, other people just might think that the grass in your yard is a whole lotta green. 5 green stars.

Realize that this is just a story. But, if my wife even broached the subject. Trust would go to zero.

A story every bored wife should read. The greener grass soon withers and turns brown. Sure a younger single guy can spend all his time pleasing the wife but when she sees what she's losing only a total fool would travel down that road..

Hahaha, what a neat twist at the very end where we find out it's a brother-to-sister conversation...

At the very least Jerry needs to have Sue sign a post-nuptial.

Great story.

5 Stars on a good story . My ex found out that Divorce was our only answer.

She downplayed it as a "slight brain fart". A decision that could have destroyed lives. Very disturbing. How long until she gets the urge to seeker greener pastures again I wonder?

Perfect flip ending. If your not to busy helping Blackrandi with those story challenge's could you write us another

"I see. You logic seems to be impeccable, Mary. I like the way you face any possible problems and head them off before they get out of hand," I agreed."

===> Dialog and word play was amazing. Lol. Btw some commenters take this story too seriously. Meant to be a farce. Nice twist at the end. All of Bill's arguments were sound. Of course in real life, even asking / making the request damages the marriage. Even if recoverable, the fallout is not simple.and would take time and effort to heal, and there is always the chance that the marriage has been poisoned such that it eventually deteriorates or dies. But that wasn't the point of this story. Bill as a close friend to Jerry and a brother to Sue was at a nexus point where, with an assist from his wife and the widow Karen, could exert significant influence on their marriage. Wish more family members / close friends would do this when they knew someone they loved or a close friend was about to fall. The insipid acceptance or keeping quiet at a pivotal juncture is disappointing and all too common. Kudos to Jerry to at least talk about it. Note Sue was genuinely shocked about the divorce talk, not angry, shocked. And then Mary put the ball on the field and let Karen run with it and terrify Sue. Again in their first long phone call, all of Bill's reasoning about marriage and the challenges was dead on. Sue wasn't ready to here it as she felt miserable and unappreciated. Feeling neglected, unwanted, or ignored is the main reason (in real life) that married women cheat after the first two years.

hilarious story, but there's still a lot of emotional trauma that she has to make up for. Plus how does he know she hasn't already taken someone for a test drive? I think he should give Karen a test drive, she sounds like a better wife imo.

HILARIOUS, but hubby deserves better. Karen's a much better fit imo.

Enjoyed it. Well done.

Great story and storyline!! Wife even enjoyed this one! Thank you!!

A great story by and excellent writer. Read it. Enjoy it. Choose your friends wisely

Wait a minute, Bill was her brother!? Why the fuck didn't he just say something like, "alright listen here and listen good, you stupid, selfish, narcissistic slut. If you go through with this insanity not only will you lose your husband, your friends, and probably your job, since everyone in town will know - believe me, we will make sure and never let you live it down - that you are nothing but a fucking slut. Additionally, I will no longer be your brother. For all intents and purposes you will be dead to me. As for your nieces and nephews (assume they have kids), forget about ever seeing them again. I will not expose them to such a horrible influence. If there is any sanity left in that fucked up head of yours, I strongly suggest you take some time to think about your actions and the sheer destruction your selfish choices will bring about should go through with this madness. Call me back in one hour to let me know that you've made the right decision. Or never contact me again." *hangs up phone*

Mary seems like the best actual loving wife. Bill lucked out on that one.

Super story. I chuckled several times, and I loved the way you told the story from the friends point of view. Just when I didn't think it could get any better, you put it over the top in the very last line. Bravo! Five stars!

lolol,, liked it, "treat your wife like a queen and she will treat you like a slave" old saying,,

Nothing like off-the-wall to drive home a point (and make it stick). Thanks HDK.

somewhere east of Omaha

Thanks for a really fun read! Great job!

5 Stars and I wish I would have married a girl like Mary .. Sadly i did not listen to my friends and family