All Comments on 'You Know You Want to Watch'

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FloatingdadFloatingdadover 2 years ago

Nicely written, and a fun story. Well done! I only hope you have plans for another installment.

Having contributed to other story boards, I know both how hard it is to write sequels, as well as how annoying “suggestions” can be. My only suggestion is to encourage you to follow your story.

lazy_readerlazy_readerabout 2 years ago

Intriguing. I kept waiting to find out how Coach Jane was going to reveal the fact that would allow her to escape prison. In spite of Lisa's assertion, I think she's (figuratively and maybe literally) fucked. How could she be so stupid? Even without the sexual battery charge, they've got enough to send her to prison for life. At least, she might take comfort that her partner will be in the same prison.

Well written and interesting, but I cannot say I enjoyed it.

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12/4/2023 Our next story is scheduled to be released today. Reading a letter to Dear Abby in last week’s paper inspired our most recent submission. The letter delt with a wife writing Dear Abby wanting to know if it was normal for her husband to “please himself” on a daily b...