by Tall78701
Nicely written, and a fun story. Well done! I only hope you have plans for another installment.
Having contributed to other story boards, I know both how hard it is to write sequels, as well as how annoying “suggestions” can be. My only suggestion is to encourage you to follow your story.
Intriguing. I kept waiting to find out how Coach Jane was going to reveal the fact that would allow her to escape prison. In spite of Lisa's assertion, I think she's (figuratively and maybe literally) fucked. How could she be so stupid? Even without the sexual battery charge, they've got enough to send her to prison for life. At least, she might take comfort that her partner will be in the same prison.
Well written and interesting, but I cannot say I enjoyed it.