by Chebeba
.... mixed up some words.
For instance, "She takes the queue, just as I hoped ..." should have been "She takes the cue, just as I hoped"
a) 'queue' - a line of people,
b) 'cue' - A thing said or done that serves as a signal to an actor or other performer to enter or to begin their speech or performance
Not me and the kid. There are many others. You should consider an editor.