All Comments on 'You Shouldn't Have Come'

I hope you write more of this story. The opening is very tantalising, I want to see what happens between the current wife and the ex.

The ex made the right decision when she called it what it was and got away from that pussy and the other pussy.

Well this is a good start to a story. I will need to see what all happens from here. does the ex leave, or does mademoiselle bring her on board or does the ex fall to the dominate one.? what about the daughter will she get a car or get to pull mom's or dad's leash? let us see what you can do. no rating for now, will wait.

Pappasleaze!

You had the beginnings of a good story. I was invested until the end. You ended it too quickly and left me wanting more. Good try, congrats. Im looking forward to seeing more from you

Well written but, for me, more proof, if it were needed, of the misandrist agenda allowed by the pathetic weak male.