by Myanlass
This is a wonderful story. I love where things are going, especially after the break up. Please let us know what the new story (from the 4/23/11 request) is going to be. Let us, help you get everything out!
I don't care wat the excuse he had for leaving gale the way he did, he was a coward and chose 2 walk away. Speaking from some experience, when someone leaves the way he did ther's no way in hell you'll be able 2 trust him again. Lust maybe, but not trust. And if gale falls 4 him again then she probably deserved 2 be screwed over majorely
I kind of agree with the previous comment that Patrick better have one hell of an excuse for leaving the way he did Gale, not some lame one. Because to hurt someone like that and to say the words he said shouldn't be easily forgivable not even in a story....lol. So hopefully he grovels A LOT! But I am liking Gale more and more
Okie so need more than a one pager because this is getting just too good.
what happened. My guess it has something to do with the parents and not getting something, like being left out of the will or disowned if he actually married Gale. I could be wrong but that's the only reason that I can think of that would be strong enough for him to do that.
Was Gale pregnant when Patrick left her....there are some clues of her maybe carring a baby...like when she whispered 'what about our family?' or putting a hand on her stomach...I think that she may have miscarried due to her heartbreak...WHAT A JERK!!!! IF THIS IS TRUE AND I AM ON THE RIGH TRACK.
you left the ending hanging nicely. I'll look forward to the next installament.
Thanks for the update and hope to see more. I'm not reading as much as before but glad to find the update.
i like the way your going with this story. i still want her to hit him then make him explain himself. but that feeling is going away slowly. lol. good luck and may beautiful sunrises and sunsets always be on your horizon.
Really like wher e this story is going and i cannot wait to wait for the next chapter.
I've been constantly checking for an update on this story and I hate to say it but I feel slightly disappointed. It feels too rushed instead of James telling her that Patrick may have been forced I wish she found out herself due to a heated argument between the two. You are very talented and please dont make us wait too long for the next update!
First, i like that you kept this series going. All those stories has been great. I just love the characters. It was loving serious and sooo funny, {Nik-'I think I'm sick}. That was soo funny to me. I like that Gale got a different prospective from her brother-in-law. A lot of people jump to conclusions without seeing the other side.
I cant wait for the next chapeter and I love the character mara, she is hilarious and I love how James and jade are still apart of the story.
Don't worry about apologizing... life happens.
Remember we will always be there supporting you...
Namaste
Seeing as my name *is* Gail...do you not think to actually pick a spelling of it?
Last chapter was Gale, this one...Gail and by the looks of it, in the next few chapters Gayle...
It's fucking annoying. GET AN EDITOR!
And it is not a "guy" thing: I con't believe anybody forced him to do something, he CHOSE to do it. He had a choice, and he made it. So no, even though Gale was my least favourite character in the series, the way she behaved towards Jade was so awful, even she dones'nt deserved that. I know she is going to end up with him and forget him, and that the "explanation" of his behaviour will be one to redeem him, but I really don't feell it. Whatever happened for him to leave her like that, he was weak and a coward.