All Comments on 'You'll Get Yours Ch. 01'

I think I remember reading that one in Penthouse. Hot!

Thanks for writing and posting here.

Do you have the link to originally story?

I've never found the original story, despite trying. It was from pre-internet days, in a printed magazine.

Anonymous - There are no links to a 1980's magazine LOL

I wouldn't go back after that night actually. She'd be history, and I'd forget her all together. 2 Stars

love it. keep writing!

You may wish to work on your comma splices and run on sentences, as well as adding dialogue between paragraphs in order to make your story easier to read. But it was enjoyable nonetheless.