All Comments on 'You'll Get Yours Ch. 01'

You may wish to work on your comma splices and run on sentences, as well as adding dialogue between paragraphs in order to make your story easier to read. But it was enjoyable nonetheless.

love it. keep writing!

I wouldn't go back after that night actually. She'd be history, and I'd forget her all together. 2 Stars

Anonymous - There are no links to a 1980's magazine LOL

I've never found the original story, despite trying. It was from pre-internet days, in a printed magazine.

Do you have the link to originally story?

I think I remember reading that one in Penthouse. Hot!

Thanks for writing and posting here.