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JeanCFNMJeanCFNMover 4 years ago
there has to be at least one more chapter

We need to know how much he shows and how they deal with the fact that he has to get back to the car without revealing everything to all on the way. He seem so easy to play.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Come on, show us the goods!

Nice cliffhanger, but I hope you find a way to get him completely naked later on and parade him around in public. We deserve a prolonged embarrassing exposure for Tim after so much tantalizing build-up. I'm not worried, reading your work I am confident that you will deliver a grand and hilarious spectacle.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I will say the office girls do deserve some type of retribution. have they been called and been told about the revenge taking place on Their behalf.

can see the headlines now Cyclist wearing Cycle Wear clothing has a manufacturing defect that left him exposed

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great story. Please continue. I hope Tim remains in the submissive role throughout

Great story. I hope Tim remains in the submissive role throughout and that it will not be too long between parts. Thank you so much for giving us this. So many male submission stories either end up with the guy taking charge or are about torture. This is believable and so hot

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Plan successful!

Now the ladies get to reap the rewards of all their hard work. I hope Tim puts on a show and that it is super embarrassing for him.

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