All Comments on 'Young Boss, Unwilling Celebrity Pt. 42'

Totally awesome can't wait for what happens next

This is where Barefan shows his true genius...in the exact, precise, perfectly penned detail of Tim's group humiliation. I'm hoping for at least 10,000 more words of this delicious group assault! I don't often make requests of authors (it's THEIR story, and I respect that), but geez, the woman fingering Tim's butt-hole was fantastic! Ooh, and another ball-sack grab! Hopefully these women make another, um, grasping entry. 5 Stars...of course! 🙏

That was insanely hot! I have always wanted to read a scene just like that. Truly you know how to make dreams come true Barefan. All these images of Tim's humiliation and group groping will be playing in my head on a loop for a long time. I'm sure it will be the same for Tim as well.

I love this story and the slow, tantalising build up. Another amazing chapter - Tim being groped from everywhere. I would've loved another tug-o-war with the towel, it ending it tatters as well (I'm imagining that lol). I love the assaults on Tim's dick, butt and hole - a can feel him squirming in desperation, getting closer to 'spilling over', and wanting to get away. I'd love to hear about Tim being groped and stroked on all sides at once - dick stroked, balls fondled, nipples teased, and being fingered ... I wonder how long he will last!

Finger up the ass ! No Lube ! That would've hurt 😢 Hopefully if they put a finger or anything else in his ass 👀 in the next chapter , they are kind enough to use lots of lube or baby oil 😉😊 Maybe that 50 year milf should just oil him up head to toe , Loads of the other women can help . I hope Carly gets brought back into the story 🙏

Too far fetched to be entertaining.

I am totally loving this series and couldn't wait for this new chapter - I read it straight away and posted a comment. The comment never appeared though, so I may have hit the wrong button or said something wrong (apols to mods if I did). I actually joined because of your work, Barefan, and a couple of other authors. I might try to write some of my own CFNM/CNM/OON one day soon! Anyway, on this series and chapter. Just fantastic. You write so well! Pace, description, etc. I'd love to know a little more about Tim's cock, apart from being 7". Cut or uncut? Does it curve one way (since he can't seem to keep it flaccid lol!)? I love the action in this chapter: Tim being groped and stroked from all directions, grabbing his dick and balls, slapping his butt, even fingering him, so he's getting closer and closer to the edge. It would've been fun if there was a tug-o-war for his towel (like boxers) and it got ripped into unusable pieces lol. Can't wait to see what happens next. Maybe the women will go after all his erogenous zones at once: finger him, spank him, stroke him, fined his balls and nipples ... I wonder how long he can last. Amazing work!

Hahahahahaha. Wonderful. I wish they will eat him

I am loving all of these hands on his naked body. Tim getting all sweaty is a nice touch. Be sure to get a commemorative photo of Tim before he has to streak his way out of there.

Answer to your question about cut or not cut: https://www.literotica.com/s/young-boss-becomes-unwilling-model-ch-11-12

Finally Anna whistled softly. "Ladies, we now know, without a shadow of a doubt..." she paused to look at both of them, "... that our boss is circumsized!"

can't see this going any further than Tim ending up in the emergency room getting some serious treatment for the injuries he's getting , really unlubricated finger up the anus that's rape

Barefan, I feel you may have inadvertently opened up the plot to a few problems having moved from a good story about exposure to assault - digital penetration in the UK is the same a rape (attempt can carry the same penalty as the main offence) as it is captured on camera the TV company are duty bound to report it which would also capture "Tim nice but Dim" (a character from a UK comedy sketch Show) committing an offence as well by smacking the audience members bottom which could end up with him on the sex offenders register.

He could also end up injured in A&E with all those women on top of him even if they are from a day outing from the local anorexic society. Somebody needs to set the fire alarm off.

Maybe I'm getting a little ahead of myself, but with the Naked Attraction marketing campaign achieving such unexpectedly high levels of success, one cannot help but expect that Tim's department could eventually gain the attention of even higher-paying, female-led corporate clientele. I wonder what sorts of new products they might request for him to personally demonstrate in future pitch meetings.

Terrific story Barefan, thanks so much. Can't wait to see what happens next. Every step of the way you've managed to surprise me with unexpected twists and turns.

a good read until the scrum bit , have to agree with other comments about the injury risk , I played in rugby match in the 80's when a scrum collapsed and one the opposition players ended up paralysed . thought long and hard about never playing again after that.

Tim could earn better money with a proper advertising company , with way the story is going its unlikely to get that cheque that's been locked away, he may not be the sharpest knife in the drawer but is being financially conned

I've never seen readers demand realism from an author in the way they do from Barefan... it's a very curious thing. I personally see this as a fantasy story, and wholly enjoy it on that level. Yes, of course none of this would fly in the real world, absolutely not, but on an erotic fiction website? Yes, please! 😊

I totally agree with MyBareTorso. As an erotic fantasy story, it's one of the best on this site and I thoroughly enjoy it!

if you put Tim in realistic situations a lot of readers would expect a realist reaction and response from him , it does not state that he is immune to pain and has no brain, if it is purely fantasy should it not be stated and in a different category

This is one of my favorite episodes so far! Keep up the good work!

perhaps if Barefan put a short paragraph at the start of the short chapters (like MyBareTorso) explaining it was fantasy world it would help to explain the situation

This is so sexy! Get those hands all over him! I am looking forward to having these girls watch Tim blow his load at this point. That's going to be so embarrassing! You got to find a way to get him fully naked on TV! Thank you for an awesome chapter.

OMG 🔥 I'm going crazy 🤪 waiting for Tim's....what will it be? I don't know but my imagination is making me so horny my balls are constantly churning and my poor....you know.......is throbbbing and leaking. Please finish Tim off!

I think Barefan 's story is a fantastical piece set within the real world, in the same way that something like, say, the film Die Hard is not "realistic"...it takes place in a world we recognize, but it's not ever supposed to be "believable". What happens in Barefan 's story would obviously NEVER happen in real life, and that's part of the fun. In real life, not all women are sex crazed nymphos desperate to strip a guy...that why I come here to read about them!