by Drcock666
DC6,
Part two. Lisa, Micha, and Steve's parts, I liked. Great build up for Lisa and Steve. The scene between the girls....very well done.
Please keep writing. You're doing well.
sd31r20
There is no problem with your english. No problem with your story either. It made me wish I had a sister to play with instead of being an only child. Glad you enjoy writing stories like this one. I'll start reading the rest of them today. I can't think of anything to critique. Your descriptions were vivid and the story evolved smoothly. I'm sure you can continue this series including Micha in a threesome. Keep it coming!
Good start to this short fantasy story. What is with this Katie and Jack? How did they fit in with Lisa and Michelle? Part 2 get Michelle more involved. Then end the story.
SHE IS WISE GIRL, USING HER BROTHER AS HER FUCK BUDDY. No worry about someone blabbing all over school or the neighborhood. No drama about him or her wanting to get married or being jealous and causing trouble, Just very satisfying sex pretty much whenever you want it!