All Comments on 'Young Wives Need Special Training'

short...good premise though

would be nice to see a sequel, or several for that matter, along the lines of thier separate vacations to the homecomming and possible group action.

The possibilities are endless for such a creative start, i enjoyed the twist at the end.

Kepp up the good work

marry a whore or create one from a spouse unless - unless she can earn her way on streetcorners. Much too mundane author - kick it up to reality where you are appreciated!

The writing ripped along at a great pace, brusqe in style - short punchy sentences - matching the brutality of David and Molly's relationship.

More please.

Would you "Jam his smelly cock in her mouth?"

If so you are a very sick jerk

Don't you love it when a plan comes together. Good story, Thanks.

nasty beyond appreciation. the author eats shit. this could hve been a good story but the author eats shit and ruins it

I like short pieces. I loved the domination... personally I would never have a shit covered cock in my mouth, but that's just personal preferance. Overall I liked the fact that the female character had no control, that the macho/jerk neighbor was in complete control.

even if you hung them with a new rope. That expression fits a few of the readers here. This is an erotic site, for crying out loud. What are you guys doing here if you can't take it. Get a life! ML

I liked your style : fast paced, with a twist at the end. Will there be more on this couple(s)?

How about two assholes that are about to be divorced? Awful story

Nasty story about shit eating people.

I don't usually like this cheating stories. But honestly because the men tricked the "wives" and they both seem happy. I'm ready to accept this story and gave it my first 5 to a non-destroying wife story. Good job Dinsmore, your a great author....I like your romance stories as well. As to the people that are negative below....fuck you and your wife. haha just kidding, no really fuck your wife. lol