by SPcuckold82
I don't approve of writing in the second person POV, it basically requires the reader to become the character and if there are issues that don't sit quite right the story loses a lot of appeal. Here we had a femdom chastity tale which is something I enjoy reading about, it also heavily involved financial domination which is something I don't care for. However I can see the appeal and I can get past that until I need to put myself in the role: sadly I'm much too careful with my money so a large part of the story was lost to me, maybe it's just me? Otherwise I liked it, the growing chastity and the basic domination/submission were good, I'd like to think she might work it so that he becomes permanently imprisoned while he's actually paying her to do it. Okay I know I'm contradicting myself but we're all allowed fantasies.
Fun story lots of fantastical findom which I love and I adore that She is aroused by Her Dominance and his financial submission.
I would have like more characterisation or development but an enjoyable read all the same.
Thank you for sharing.
really good i love it
i like how mean the girl is
and i like the way you write it it's nice and easy to read
i look forward to more if you continue it
i really enjoyed it. i have personal experience with cashmeets, shoe licking and getting my balls kicked. This story made me very excited. Thank you.