All Comments on 'You're Mine! Ch. 02'

by jim313

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Awsome

Awsome. Keep it going, its great. Look forward to more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Great understanding of excellent sex

The writings of a man who understands how to please any woman sexually.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
You might want to reread your first chapter

before writing the next ones. According to ch 01, he was on the seventh hole when the lightning struck, yet in your recap in this chapter, he says he was on the fourth hole.

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