All Comments on 'You're Mine! Ch. 05'

As a female, I am turned on by bisexual men pleasing each other, with their lady's knowledge and participation. It's very hot.

good story, nice concept, but find an editor, I'll even volunteer. You start a nice scene, and suddenly it goes from 'she is riding MY cock' to 'how she loves the feel of HIS cock'. It should be uniform and 'she loved the feel of MY cock' ... an editor or proofreader would find these simple errors and help correct them, thus making your series a much better read.