All Comments on 'You're Not in Kansas Anymore'

I liked the start of the of the story but feel the ending was quite abrupt. Would have loved to have seen how you could have explored what happens to her tied up in the office and what actually happens to her over the course of her sentence.

I liked the start of this story but feel that it ended quite abrupt. Would love to have seen you explore what happened in the office and over the course of her sentence.

Very good and very short I hope you continue.

A story ripped from the headlines! (although her sentence did get reduced to 2 months)