by miniwritessmut
I liked it. It was a unique story and satirical in poking fun at the BDSM world. The writing was also clean, well paced and error free. I enjoyed the style of narrative giving a good peek into poor Michelle's head. Hope you do more, and I think you could easily expand the length in order to better paint a picture of Michelle or any other character you wish to explore.
Thank you! As the Michelle character's basically a fictionalized version of me I will definitely be writing more about "her" in the future. Thanks for the lovely compliments and feedback! It's greatly appreciated. :-)