All Comments on 'You're the One for Me Ch. 02'

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sacrificedangelsacrificedangelover 15 years ago
love it!

I dont think Ive ever laughed along with a story before, that was brilliant! Looking forward to Ch3. x

ebonygriotebonygriotover 15 years ago
Brilliant pace and humour

Once again you have displayed your art as a primo storyteller. I'm really drawn the the distinctive characters of Caden and Austin along with the witty barbs between the siblings. I couldn't get the smile off my face as I read this chapter:) Very witty with an erotic edge. Loved the shop scene with Benjamin and Austin. Update soon please.

fanofromancefanofromanceover 15 years ago
Can u smell the smoke?

2 words : HOT HOT HOT. cant wait for the next one, gd job!

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 15 years ago
Just stumbled upon this story...

and I really like it! Keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to chapter 3.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Hahaha

This story is funny as hell!! Keep it up, can't wait for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I Laughed...

I laughed out loud while reading this story. It kept me smiling. Please keep going. Really looking forward to seeing the difference between mating 2 weres and a were/human relationship. (If there is a difference.)

GlosUKGlosUKover 15 years ago
Fab

Caden and Austin are a laugh and Elise isn't a wallflower either. PJ xx

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
love it!!

I really love the flow of this story. And I wish you wrote faster!! But good things come to those who wait, so wait I shall.

gem28gem28about 15 years ago
i love shifters

yummy,alpha men and the mates they adore.double yum.

BoundlifeBoundlifealmost 13 years ago
Aww

The poor pookies, love is so complicated :)

Lo_PanLo_Panover 12 years ago
Yep!

Laughed my ass off at these two twins. Hysterical!

drews_lette11drews_lette11over 11 years ago
LUBE

Caden knows his brother too well. Had the lube all ready to go. As for Elise comment about next time Caden owing her lunch, I say caden should hit her in the forehead with a vibrator. lol

silverstar88silverstar88about 9 years ago

Omg, this chapter had me cracking up at the very beginning! 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

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