by CharactersForClimax
Welcome to the wide world of Erotica! I haven't read any of your tales, yet, but this essay/Q&A/intro was fascinating -- and I'll be delving into your stories next!
I love getting a feel for who an author really is, so thank you for that!
Your weaknesses are shared by most writers.
I've used the editor volunteer program lit offers, but it is difficult to find an editor that will stick with you -- but may be worth a shot.
Though, from what I see above, you have a better grasp on grammar than many of the stories posted on the site, so don't be so hard on yourself. Have your partner read your stories, and if you have a friend that you feel comfortable letting you read your tales in a raw format.
Sexual word choice depends on word flow. Sometimes "pussy" just reads better than "slit". Don't over think it, or spend too long on thesaurus.com trying to find the perfect word for a scene. Remember, at least on this site, you can always go back and edit your tale later.
Again, Welcome! I look forward to reading your work!